Worn

October 12, 2017 / Karina Pinella

Image: Pixabay

Like shoes with no soles
From walking for miles and miles
Home at last, but worn.

6 thoughts on “Worn”

Lashaan (Bookidote)

October 14, 2017 at 9:43 PM

Nailed the analogy! I can feel the exhaustion compressed in a can! 🙂

LikeLiked by 1 person

Reply
percolatingpoetry

October 13, 2017 at 8:26 PM

You’ve packed a lot into these few lines. I love the analogy.

LikeLiked by 1 person

Reply
- Karina Pinella
  
  October 13, 2017 at 9:24 PM
  
  Thanks ☺️
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
  
  Reply
  - percolatingpoetry
    
    October 13, 2017 at 9:25 PM
    
    You are most welcome 🙂
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
    
    Reply
Lynz Real Cooking

October 12, 2017 at 2:33 PM

Nice Karina!

LikeLiked by 1 person

Reply
- Karina Pinella
  
  October 12, 2017 at 2:40 PM
  
  Thanks, Lynn ☺️
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply

Leave a reply to Karina Pinella Cancel reply