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Rich red wine
From the very best vine.
Drink and dine, drink and dine.
Later together me and you
Zip right through
This long powdery line.
Marking
The beginning
Of our decline.
Image: Pixabay
Rich red wine
From the very best vine.
Drink and dine, drink and dine.
Later together me and you
Zip right through
This long powdery line.
Marking
The beginning
Of our decline.
Lovely!
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Superb brevity! Raw and destructive with a strangely lyrical quality.
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Great job!
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Ahh.. and things turn to shit, just like that. Nice one. 🙂
– Lashaan
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🙂
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Excellent!
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That’s a lifestyle for many, thank goodness not me!
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True and whew!
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Oh my.. great poem haha
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I like the rythm, nice
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Nice!
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Are you back? Nice to hear from you!
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I’m trying to be back. Work-life balance and all that. Nice to hear from you too!
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I hear that. It was getting difficult to post every day so I have started posting every after two days of not posting. For example, post on Monday and then Thursday and then Sunday.
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I struggle with every month! I admire how you’re able to keep the quality so high!
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Thanks!
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