The Finish Line

March 29, 2017March 28, 2017 / Karina Pinella

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Rich red wine
From the very best vine.
Drink and dine, drink and dine.
Later together me and you
Zip right through
This long powdery line.
Marking
The beginning
Of our decline.

22 thoughts on “The Finish Line”

filthydee123

April 6, 2017 at 6:09 PM

Lovely!

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- Karina Pinella
  
  April 6, 2017 at 6:10 PM
  
  Thanks
  
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Poet Rummager

April 4, 2017 at 2:00 AM

Superb brevity! Raw and destructive with a strangely lyrical quality.

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- Karina Pinella
  
  April 4, 2017 at 7:30 AM
  
  Thanks!
  
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Lynz Real Cooking

April 1, 2017 at 5:01 PM

Great job!

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- Karina Pinella
  
  April 1, 2017 at 5:04 PM
  
  Thanks!
  
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Lashaan and Trang (Bookidote)

March 30, 2017 at 1:59 AM

Ahh.. and things turn to shit, just like that. Nice one. 🙂

– Lashaan

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 30, 2017 at 7:25 AM
  
  🙂
  
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markrenney2

March 29, 2017 at 1:40 PM

Excellent!

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 29, 2017 at 1:43 PM
  
  Thanks!
  
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anotherfoodieblogger

March 29, 2017 at 12:29 PM

That’s a lifestyle for many, thank goodness not me!

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 29, 2017 at 1:03 PM
  
  True and whew!
  
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megaeggz

March 29, 2017 at 10:41 AM

Oh my.. great poem haha

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 29, 2017 at 11:11 AM
  
  Thanks
  
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charlypriest

March 29, 2017 at 8:33 AM

I like the rythm, nice

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 29, 2017 at 8:42 AM
  
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BRH

March 29, 2017 at 7:23 AM

Nice!

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- Karina Pinella
  
  March 29, 2017 at 7:41 AM
  
  Are you back? Nice to hear from you!
  
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  - BRH
    
    March 29, 2017 at 10:19 AM
    
    I’m trying to be back. Work-life balance and all that. Nice to hear from you too!
    
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    - Karina Pinella
      
      March 29, 2017 at 10:32 AM
      
      I hear that. It was getting difficult to post every day so I have started posting every after two days of not posting. For example, post on Monday and then Thursday and then Sunday.
      
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      - BRH
        
        April 1, 2017 at 6:35 AM
        
        I struggle with every month! I admire how you’re able to keep the quality so high!
        
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      - Karina Pinella
        
        April 1, 2017 at 8:06 AM
        
        Thanks!
        
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