Long distance I walked
Looked forward to seeing you
Two minutes too late.
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Long distance I walked
Looked forward to seeing you
Two minutes too late.
Karina Pinella 
I love this! Pulls the ol’ heartstrings.
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Thanks!
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You’re getting so good with the haiku poems; even if you’re off by one more syllable than necessary in the second line. I know, I know, I’m a stick in the mud… or is it a head on a stick?? 😀
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Gasp! I must correct at once. Thanks for the comment!
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Looked=1, forward=2, to=1, seeing=2, you=1 total 7. Right?
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I see what happened. The last word in line 2 appears in line 3 of your setting. It looks fine on my smartphone and PC though, but when I saw it in my email from you, the format looks different. Strange.
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Weird. It said “Looking forward…” when I saw it last time. Hmm.
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That is strange. I hope I don’t experience the same technical problems ThumbUp had a few posts back.
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wonderful use of so few words.
Has me hooked and thinking:
fate moves in those mysterious ways and maybe this was a lucky escape?
Hope so …
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Thanks. May be a lucky escape based on the story your mind thinks up.
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oh boy 2 minutes?
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So close . . .
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Yes
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What a lonely sight to see.
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next time, run.
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I don’t know if they can sustain long distance running.
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Just minutes.
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Beautifully sad. Sometimes no matter how hard we try…
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Just minutes . . .
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oh nooooooo
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