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He banged her up bad
She’s almost six feet under
He climbs out the ditch
Sobered up quickly
He misses her suddenly
She made him feel good
Remorse sets in him
He yells up to the heavens,
“I loved my Corvette.”
Out of Control
Karina Pinella
Writing the Wrong, Right, and Ridiculous
Karina Pinella 
Nice!
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Thanks!
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That plot twist, though. Good one.
– Lashaan
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Thanks
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Damn! I wasn’t expecting that! A happy…but somewhat sad ending! Haha.
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Poor Corvette! Why couldn’t it have been a woman instead?! (I’m kidding 😀 )
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😉
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Hey Karina,
That was me commenting as DD. I thought your story was twisted and fun, so I replied in the same tone. If I offended you, please forgive me. To make things less confusing, I won’t be commenting as DD any longer — just plain old boring Rose. 😀
<3,
Rose
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I have a sense of humor like you. I am not offended. I hope I am not offending anyone if I thought that was a pretty good comment. I get dark humor, which I tend to do but offline cuz I don’t want to offend anyone. However, sometimes I will post some anyway. All good with me and it is OK if you take on DD as your alter ego. I know you both officiate Slashmonster.
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I do appreciate your humor but just wanted to make sure. Lol. Stories and poems with an edge are a thrill to write, aren’t they? You churn out pretty amazing ones. Funny as hell! DD is fun, but it gets confusing for people, so I’ll step back from using him. Thanks so much for responding and enjoy your weekend!
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Thanks! The reason I like to write is so I can unleash my craziness. Where else would it go, right? You’re an amazing writer yourself. I appreciate your comments. Have a fun weekend.
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I totally agree! Thanks again 🙂
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Great twist ending, love it!!
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Thanks 🙂
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wasn’t sure what was coming Karina! liked the ending
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked the twist
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I was worried in the beginning!
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That’s the idea!
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yes you are tricky Karina and a great writer xx
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Thank you for your kind words.
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you are welcome xx
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unexpected!
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